Wasting Away

by blindedxxbyxxlove   Sep 23, 2005


Wasting away, because of the lies and dispare
Wasting away, until one day he cares

Wasting away, because of the tears and the hate
Wasting away, because of their horrible fate

Wasting away, because she thought he cared
Wasting away, because of all the times they shared

Wasting away, until nothing is left
Wasting away, until her long awaited death

Wasting away, my only best friend
Wasting away, to what she hopes is the end

Wasting away, is my sisters mind
Wasting away, with the tick of time

Wasting away, her eyes blinded with tears
Wasting away, from her childhood fears

Wasting away, tonight, she gave up the fight
Wasting away, I love you sissy

Goodnight...

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  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Reading this makes me feel so selfish. I realize that I was hurting you..all of you. All for just him. He is and never will be more important that any of you guys. I love you all and you have no idea how much you helped me through. You're right...I did want to die...because of a guy...a guy. I am so glad you unknowingly talked me out of just wasting away! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I really felt this poem deeply, it's obvious how much you care. I can really relate to it, and how true it is! It's hard when someone you care about is going through this, I just hope your friend recovers.
    All my best wishes, for both you and your friend,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    I agree with the other comments about this poem ...All I can say Is AWESOME job...Thanks for your comment on mine also...
    Tisha

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    Very well written. I could feel your overwhelming concern. It is obvious you truly care

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Baby, thank you. I'm sorry I've worried you so much to where you wrote about it. I Love You. I swear, I'll get better!!!

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