Why

Hmmm very heartfelt! well hope someday u will find the answers why? great job and keep it up

This was good aswell, Only thing though, Is maybe try and use a bit better grammer. I'm not too fussy on it, But.. Some people will rate your poems lower for it..

Otherthan that, I thought it was pretty good. I liked at the end how you asked why. Thought that gave it a great ending. Keep it up. 5/5

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Really strong emotion in this. The rhyme was excellent. It flowed nicely. I don't really understand what you were trying to say though. But overall great job!

This is a very strong emotional peice. It says a lot in very little words, and I think those are the best poems to read. It's somewhat confusing though, I'm not really sure what the idea is, is it just life? or is it a certain topic? Either way, it was well written and clever, the way you use your sentencing.

Take Care,
Renee

This is really good...5/5
Becky
xoxo