Watch it Flow

by HighPerfection   Oct 4, 2005


They make me mad
They make me sad
But i can always depend on them
To make me happy again

My parents put me in therapy but that didn't help at all
She said well if you are hurting yourself you have to tell me
So me and your parents can find a alternative solution
I was like why in the hell would i tell you and walked out

I went to the bathroom took out my "friends" and they said hello
I thought well if i hadn't gotten arrested this would have never happened
oh god why am i so messed up

Well my "friends" brought me to peace
I relaxed and let my "friends" do the work on there own
I was at home i was free
Watching all my "friends" flow free

~!~defiantly bad but oh well i just needed to write~!~
~!~rate and comment at will~!~
(c) Hillary Dorsey 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jo

    That was good..i liked how u represented ur "friendz" as the way u released ur pain-but just out of curiousity, was ur "friendz" a blade, or pillz or sumthin'? cuz that's just what i thought..but great job n-e-wayz tho!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    I agree, it's a good poem, quite chilling how you refer to your "friends," i found it really effective the way its like a story (to me anyways) and also the layout changes, it's a big risk to do that sometimes but damn another great poem...5/5, i'm definately adding you to my faves, hope to see some more of your work xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××

    Argh, as if it was bad. such an amazing poem. i really liked it how you described "friends"... hmm interesting. thats a bum about your other account being deleted. keep on writing and thanks lots for the comment xx

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