Unfinished

by Kirsty   Oct 7, 2005


The words they flow
And scribble to the page
The windows broken
In the anger of your rage
With red silken hair
Shimmers from the moon
Summon my presence
I'll stand with you soon
I want to rejoin it
So cold is my kiss
Don't cry for your sorrow
For life you have missed

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  • 18 years ago

    by sharni

    I really like this one because of the describing words are really effective.

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    That's beautiful hun

  • 18 years ago

    by sharni

    Really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Strange, beautiful language, and it gave a sort of calm feeling, that was nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Lovely
    love it
    it i love
    it love i
    etc...etc...
    love you xx

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