Through Color Blinded Eyes

by HOLLY ARMER   Oct 12, 2005


Colors swirl around me
blinding to my eyes
Tarnished by the darkness
embedded by your lies

My once bright and shining world
lost within the black
As my heart flounders under
the weight of your attack

Watching the orange and yellow's
fading to angry red
Cast into this hateful life that's
now painted up with dread

Searching all the boundaries
for wisps of pink or blue
Just anything to challenge
the void I'm falling through

But there are no colors to save me
so here's to my demise
As I watch this vacant world
through color blinded eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. this is some gr8 write.. i reli enjoyed this poem.. it had amazing flow and perfect rhyme.. and the topic was very captivating.. i wrote a poem "Color Blind", but i dodnt post it coz im working on improvements.. its far from ur topic tho.. maybe u cud help me out with it once im done.. lol.. but u dont have to, dont worry..
    keep up the talent
    ur reli gr8
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    Brilliant. it's beautiful. great write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Well done Holly, a powerfully moving piece with great descriptive flow and imagery. You've done a great job keep up the great work!
    Eirisa

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wonderful this is a very unique topic and the way it is written is very poetic.. I love it.. nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    This is amazing and the concept is really clever. the language is perfect.

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