Nothing will remain the same.

by Mona   Oct 18, 2005


Nothing will remain the same.

Never again will I be able to offer,
What I use to give you, I suffer,
It hurts to see, nothing will remain,
To be the way it was, the same.

But what is it you want from me?
I gave my all and now I'm empty.
I've got nothing left to lose. I fear,
I lost everything I held so dear.

Empty cup trying to fill the full cup,
Oh Wow sense reaches its top!
Shouldn't it be the other way around?
What do you say? How does that sound?

Never mind. You'll never understand.
So I'll stop explaining, before I bend,
And break. I lost my self-confidence,
If only I had a second chance..

Just to show what I possess.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Hey hunn! me again enjoying your work...i love the part ''Empty cup trying to fill the full cup,
    Oh Wow sense reaches its top!'' it sort of made me laugh....!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow thats amazing girl i love it so much...you are incredibly talented!

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I really, truly, honestly love this poem. In just a few lines i have thought, "this is me..." It is really good at portrayal of emotions! Keep up the good work! Please check out my site: http://futility.suddenlaunch3.com

    ~stevie~
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    Peace Out~

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Great poem! keep writing! ur work is different, but in a good way. it protrays different emotions all at once! very cool style! anwyays, thanks for the comment on my poem! 5/5
    hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    Great poem Mona. I know the feeling of giving someone ur all and then feeling so empty. Not a good feeling! Thanx for commenting on my poems. I hope you're doing o-tay!! Take care

    Smile,
    Black~Rose

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