The Key To Live

by Tess   Oct 22, 2005


No concious thoughts
The only key
To unlock my hell
To melody

Once told myself
I would never see
Where it was
That held the key

I searched for miles
My head slouched low
You picked me up
From the word go

Inside you saw me
And I saw you
The concious thoughts
No longer grew

***This was written about a school councilor who opened up my options and made me accept my life as it is***

***Votes/Comments are greatly appreciated and I will always return the favour***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    Its pretty good! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Wonderful!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    That was really good. i like the way you use your words and thoughts. Im glad that you got some help form that person. Much love, Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    THATS SOOO GOOD!! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey hun dat gwd dat da perosn helped u.. it was gwd though
    luv dia mwa tc xoxox