Such a sad poem full of pain and words of someone who seems so fedup from the bitterness of this world.
thats filled up with lonesome and depression.
you talk sadness in actually a very sad way.
and ur words are simple enough to get ppl feel the relation between ur work and their own feelings.
well done over this
my fav :
Not much more I Can take
The end isn't too far away
It's just become too much
To face another day
and one suggestion..ur last line needs to be changed cause ur poem flowed so well..but that line was a bit off the edge.