Another Empty Bottle

by Phantom Lord   Oct 25, 2005


Another empty bottle
Another broken dream
Living in a fantasy world
Where nothing is what it seems

Been down this road before
Just keep going around
It's become my only comfort
Picks me up when I'm down

Confused and lonely
I've abandoned all hope
So much pain inside
I can no longer cope

I know that it's killing me
And I hate what I've become
It helps me face the world
And it makes me numb

Not much more I Can take
The end isn't too far away
It's just become too much
To face another day

Another empty bottle
Another broken dream
Living in a fantasy world
And no one hears my screams

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  • 13 years ago

    by Rania

    Such a sad poem full of pain and words of someone who seems so fedup from the bitterness of this world.
    thats filled up with lonesome and depression.
    you talk sadness in actually a very sad way.
    and ur words are simple enough to get ppl feel the relation between ur work and their own feelings.

    well done over this
    my fav :
    Not much more I Can take
    The end isn't too far away
    It's just become too much
    To face another day

    and one suggestion..ur last line needs to be changed cause ur poem flowed so well..but that line was a bit off the edge.

    another gr8 writing with deep emotions.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Julie S.H.

    Another nice poem of yours!
    very well written
    keep it up!
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    I love that. Especially the ending. Great Job!