The disfigurement

by dragonfly   Oct 29, 2005


The mind, ripped and torn. Her heart shattered and scarred. The lost and lonely soul. Her life shameful and blurry. You don't want her, shes broken. You disagree? Take another look, what do you see?

Hidden behind the clothing is the proof of her madness. Scars symboling a life she could not handle. Having recently picked up the blade again, the blood gently sweeps down. Giving her what she needed, an easy way out.

Taught not to cry, tears only bring pain. She forbids the tears to come, slowly building rage. After so much she can not help but frown and as hard as she trys to hold them, the captive tears stream down.

Trying to restrain her anger, her body trembles. The silent screams shatter her thoughts. She pushes away old memories, not allowing them to renter her mind. However slowly they still come, its only a matter of time....

This poem is not finished still plz rate it, thanks!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    This poem is great, i can't wait to read the finished product. keep ti up your amazing. 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I can't wait to hear the rest but what you have got so far is very nice. your vocab is really what makes it so good, and the way you use the words together are really good. your very smart and i love your writing great job 5/5 the 3rd stanza was my favorite

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Even if it isnt finished...so far it is very good. 5/5!
    ~me~

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Yea this did rock! It will be better when finished give it a strong ending :P
    I liked the power in this the emotion its so deep and you can tel the pain in the poem.
    Well done!
    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey.. that was soo gud... such powerful words, and u described evrything perfectly.. i cud imagine wat the girl was doin.. gr8 job.. i lykd the last stanza, especially the last line.. lookin 4ward to the ending!!
    keep up the gr8 work
    Nannoush

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