by dragonfly Oct 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Glistening omniscient beauty |
by Toni
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An amazing poem, the imagery is flawless and theres such a depth of emotion there. I hope you submit some more poems, I'd love to read more xxxx |
by Jamie
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You had me fromt he first line...your vocab is soooooo powerful, sadness being symbolized by the rain is very cliche but i think you won lol, this is the best poem about this subject i have read ever great job 5/5 |
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Wow gr8 poem. gr8 rhythm and rhyme scheme. keep up the gr8 work. |
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I loved the wording you used. awsome write 5/5 |