You Wont Ignore Me This Time

by HighPerfection   Nov 3, 2005


You have ignored me when I'm alone
You ignore me when I cry
Will you ignore me once I die?

All you see is a happy cheerful girl
All you see is a girl proud of herself
But do you really see this girl

Do you see her bloodied wrist?
Do you see her when she cries?
Her friends they don't try
They only pretend to cry
What they dint know is there only aiding in her suicide

But how do you know her story
Cause she has failed at her crime
Even though she's attempted 7 times
You ignored her signs

But you wont ignore her this time
Because here goes my suicide
And this will be my what eight time

(c) Hillary Dorsey 2005

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**definatly not very good but i really wanted to write**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jo

    DAM*! lol..i don't c how u can think that's not good, cuz that's GREAT! well, take care! n 5/5 all the way!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Wow, this is so excellent. the first three lines

    You have ignored me when I'm alone
    You ignore me when I cry
    Will you ignore me once I die?

    That is awesome writing. I'm sorry you feel that way. It's hard to be suicidal, even crying for help and still getting nothing back. Try and stay strong for you and nobody else. xxx

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