So Much For Promises

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   Nov 13, 2005

You held me up
When I was down
You made me smile
When I would frown
You held my hand
When things were bad
You made me laugh
When I was sad
All the times
I needed you
You were there
And saw me through
You promised me
You'd never leave
In my heart
You'd always be
But what went wrong
Why aren't you there
It's getting darker
And I'm so scared
You left me here
To fight alone
So much for that
I'm on my own
Said you believed in me?
I guess you lied
Said I could do it?
Well trust me I tried
But now that your gone
I'm left with no hope
I'm desperately crying
Unable to cope
Tonight I'm scared
Please hold my hand
Today I'm weak
Please help me stand
Tonight I cut
You weren't there
I asked for help
You didn't care
I guess I'm just a failure
I'm sorry you can't see
I would have been there for you
if you ever needed me
But tonight I'm dying
You shut the door
And leave me bleeding
On the floor


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Latest Comments

  • 13 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    ..*breathes in && out slowly*..i'm speechless again...sorry but your poetry just blows me away

    no critique from me

  • 14 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow I can feel the fear and feeling on lonliness in this poem. I love it. You did really good.


  • 14 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Wow love 5/5. Sometimes I feel like this...great poem keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Heyy.. omg.. im speechless, this is such a sad poem.. i luv da poem cuz i can relate to it.. n as alwayz 5/5!! hehe ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Torn

    Aw hun thats really sad.
    I've been/going through the same thing with my friend now..well at least to what you've written about.
    Take care of urslef..things will get better
    Chin up babe