Would you?

by Natasha   Nov 18, 2005


Would you die if you saw me crying?
would you cry if you saw me dying?
would you save me if I were about to drown?
would you cheer me up if you caught me with a frown?
would you kill in order to make me free?
If I were poor would you be there with me?
would you kiss me if you saw me grow?
If I got killed, would you let me go?

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  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Nice structure
    xaaronx

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW! Well expressed. Good job! Thanks for sharing.

    Again, thanks for the compliments. They're greatly appreciated.

    Sincerely,

    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Good poem Mam!!

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