The Last Word Of Love

by RainbowSlider   Nov 19, 2005


I love you so much
I dream of you.
You are my dream
and my fantasy.

When I am with you
the dream is real
but living without you
is a nightmare from hell.

When we argue about love
it makes our dreams real.
Dream of me
and I will dream of you.

I love you.
I love you, more.
I loved you first.
Yeah, but I loved you last.

Love doesn't need to fight.
Love is letting go
and letting friendship
control two people.

Our words describe us
and if the description is clear
then our message to each other
describes both of us.

I look into your eyes
and see love for me.
Your eyes reflect mine
and is a mirror of my love.

Love is what happens
when friendship
can not be controlled
because we get too friendly.

I am a friend of love
and your love befriends me.
The love of friends
makes friends lovely.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    "Love is what happens
    when friendship
    can not be controlled
    because we get too friendly."
    So true, nicely done

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I really liked this poem. I especially loved this part:

    I love you.
    I love you, more.
    I loved you first.
    Yeah, but I loved you last.

    Great job! Keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I love the style of this poem. It grabbed my attention from the first stanza.. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care xx: blaine

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