Great Quotes Vs My Feelings

by End Of Eternity   Nov 23, 2005


** This one is all about what they (people) say and what i feel against them. First line is about what they say and then comes my reaction. **

# Silence speaks louder than words
* then why words unspoken hurts

# if time is the only best heal
* the why for so many years, pain is only i could feel

# if to be trusted is a greater compliment than to be loved
* i wish i had anyone of these before being shoved

# one should fear not for the future, weep not for the past
* just remember your present till you aghast

# do you know gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love
* but the sooner you fall the sooner you will be pulled above

# love is the only force capable of transforming an enemy into friend
* though sometimes friends only help your life reach an end

# with no hope is left no fear
* someone waiting for me behind that noose
* yes I can see so clear

# go to heaven for the climate and hell for company
* no-one can save you, as thats where you will find me

# life is just a chance to grow a soul
* the moment you blink your eye, you enter black whole

# only a life lived for others is a life worthwhile
* thats why i breathe, as my pain makes other smile

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wah, kya vision hai tumhara. Aur kya kahe? lol.... Be positive yaar! :-) You had to meet me a while back. Very creative response though. I admire your creativity.

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was really unique. I really loved the way you wrote it. you're
    a great poet. keep the good job.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Let's see...

    # if time is the only best heal
    * the why for so many years, pain is only i could feel

    about this line...don't worry...nothing wrong with it...about time can heal pain...I don't agree...now I'm saying my opinion...based on the sentence...I think u don't agree either...well...just saying what I think...nothing 2 do with this poem...what's the different if u r given a year or a decade...to forget about one thing...do we really need such long time to forget something...as everyday is a different day...u can just forget about something one day...it's not the time that will make us forget...it will only make our memories fade away slowly...not erase it totally...if u do not wish to forget...no matter how long it takes...u will still remember it...well...I'll quit babbling now...lol...just want to say it out..:P...

    Neway...I like the way you write your poems...all of them are different and unique...well..can't see any other poems like this...can u?

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow!
    i really loved it..like the idea..the rhythm..everything.
    From the first day i 'met' you, you've definately improved..well done
    love,
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    So true.. i believe in all those quotes... I guess, you and I share the same impression on things....

    take care..

    Love,
    Ipsita

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