Futile Promise

by Kirsty   Nov 24, 2005


Last chance to say I'm sorry
Each futile promise forgotten, gone
The windows set to open
While I sit and hate myself
Against the blade I scream
Each endless story so rotten, so wrong

Last chance to say I miss you
Each stubborn cold breath denied, lied
My instinct said it's over
But my heart still drunk your blood
And in the shade I bleed
Each drop that falls down you hide it, you cried

Last chance to say I love you
I heard you crash out forgiven, bound
I'll never get to kiss you
As I lay you hand to rest
Without our faith we fail
Broken when we fixed it I'm lost, you're found

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  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Hey this is a really good poem. I like the stanza design as it's quite unusual. I always like seeing new styles. Well done!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This is contradicting yet beautiful at the same time

    i can relate to most of what's being said

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Nice work hunny bunch
    sad but enjoyed it!
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Saw you wrote a new poem, so I went gettin myself a cup of tea to read it.

    Kirsty it's so beautiful. I really had tears in my eyes. It's so sad girl.. so sad hun.

    Very well done. It's a different style of writing which I never worked with actually haha (I like it alot).

    Very amazing actually. Very.. erm.. well.. pro.. hahah.. I'm still amature ghehe. Damn you just put it all together as if its easy. Damn you :P hahaha

    PS: OH ye don't worry I'm ok haha, Right now I am trying to write a poem about friendship, and I got stuck in it, I had these first 4 lines and they were good (well I thought they were Ok) But erm.. I don't know what's wrong with me. Just a black out or something hahaha.

    Hope you are ok hun -xxx-
    Take care sweety
    Lotsaaaaaaaaaaa love! :)

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