Bullet will whisper

by Mona   Nov 25, 2005


Bullet will whisper

Cruel storm in the dark night,
She's holding her gun tight,
She can't get no sleep tonight,
She's got enough bullets,
But she's running out of tears,
His time has come after all those years,

She's gonna shoot him,
so you will believe,
That he is no longer in her heart,

She's gonna shoot him like a dog,
Bullets will whisper in the fog.
She had gladly pointed his way,
In a well-mannered way,
Soon it will be up to God to decide
On his judgement day.

She's gonna shoot him,
so you will believe,
That he is no longer in her heart,

View is getting darker and turning black,
She hopes the light will soon come back,
Hands and legs are getting numb,
And the pain hits in like a bomb,
Beating of her heart is going faster,
Everything starts to spin around,
She points the gun at his head,
and warms the night with his death

She shot him
So you would believe,
That he is no longer in her heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This poem is awesome, and I don't rally have anything to say except...

    I think at the very beginning,
    The repeated word:
    She
    She
    She
    I think that could change to something else because it would just make the poem sound better in my opinion..
    Wow, what a crappy comment. Great poem, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by erica

    WOw... once again great work... i like the way you wrote this... i know how it feels to feel like you have to prove to ppl that u dont love sumone u shoodnt... i dated sumone my friends hated for 8 months lol.... bye 5/5!! ***

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow... pretty dark stuff.. lykd ur work on this one.. never read a poem from that point of view b4, lyk that the writer actually is lyk the antagonist..
    gud luck with the rest
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    That was really atmospheric, you can almost feel the passion and feeling pulsing thru in the rhthym and the wrds. wel dun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Wow.....mona...this is just amazing!!!
    So dark and yet there's hate and i get the feeling that she's trying to prove a point.....wow
    well done sweetie pie
    love ya lotsssssss and lotsssss like jelly-tots xxxxxx

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