Coma

by End Of Eternity   Dec 1, 2005


In my life will their be another day?
i cant speak & i cant hear but i can see you pray

for it seems as eternity tonight
but if you pray from your heart
tomorrow everything might turn alright

i just dont remember for how many years
you have been sitting by my side in tears

except your name, there is nothing more in this head
they say i have been in coma, numb for years on this bed

as i read your lips, all you now say is sorry
as this is not the way you ever felt for me

i know you love me so much
all the time you have kept your hands in mine
wondering if i could feel that touch
if in your eye i could see hope shine

i wish i could show you the way i am feeling right now
may be just for once but if i could feel your arms somehow

but here we are, sitting face to face once again
you regret for the words you said that day
and i am paying the price for trying to take my life away

though now it feels so late
but after so many years, we feel the same way
in my life will their be another day?
i cant breathe anymore but i could hear people pray

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    So much deep emotion in this poem. Brings tears to my eyes. Excellent piece. So much pain and sadness.

    though now it feels so late
    but after so many years, we feel the same way
    in my life will their be another day?
    i cant breathe anymore but i could hear people pray

    Love this ending. You have such an amazing talent.
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I'm slowly but surely working my way though all your poems =)
    And this one is just another diamond for your treasure box =)
    Well written with some wonderful wording (check out the onomatapiea (sp?) there!) lol

    "but here we are, sitting face to face once again
    you regret for the words you said that day
    and i am paying the price for trying to take my life away"

    My fave stanza. Excellently worded
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi nitin
    well again i liked ur poem. it had such a depth in it. good job.
    take care, bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    That's amazing...manage to impress me...wow...u improve a lot...that's really good...this poem is just beautifully written...keep going young man...u r still young...

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Would that suggest you've kept faith?
    i may be mistaken but if that's the case...Nitin, i'm proud of u..hang on and hopefully this lady can see how special you are and how much you care.
    Much love xoxo

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