The letter ( to be finished)

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


Pain and hurt is all i feel
And to all you this I conceal

I'm on my meds I'm better now
Until the day you read my letter

Then you will realize nothing could save me
Trapped in a dark room without a key

I tried reaching out and wanted the help
It got me no where,didn't change the way I felt

I've given up, I have no more energy to keep trying
because I am so frucking tired of crying

I don't have a good reason to comfort you
For why I did what I had to do

Once you fall down a certain # of times
You just don't see the point to get back up sometimes

You said eventually I'll be happy
But I'm still just feeling frucking crappie

I'm sorry I left, I'm sorry I'm gone
My body and soul were just so withdrawn

I lost my will to live somewhere down the line
And after that my emotion well being did decline

( TO BE FINISHED )

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  • So true. but just know that it does get better. it took me 8 years, but im starting 2 heal a little, and im healing quickly. everything is coming 2gether. and the only reason i still write is 2 get the past out, so its not bottled up inside of me, so i dont have 2 keep thinkin about the past. ima survivor. itll all be okay. ive been thru so much s h i t, n in the end im glad i didnt actually die. itll get better. XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    In the 4th to last stanza you wrote got 2 times. Other then that great flow and rhyme. Another one full of emotion. Never lose that.
    ~~Sweetie