Death in the vally

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


She lays in the valley
On the cold damp ground
The flowers dieing by her side

As dusk settles in and
The sun disappears
So does she, and all her fears

Shes ready to go now
The dirt in her hair
The bug creeping around

She lays in the place
Where she soon will be again
6 feet under all the mess
In a beautiful coffin

She closes her eyes and
Takes her last breath
Sucking in the good and
Then releasing all the bad

Finally shes happy

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Spacing is off sorry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    All i have to say is use punctuation it helps the reader know what pace to read at. Other then that great.
    ~~Sweetie