Tell Me Why?

by End Of Eternity   Dec 22, 2005


As i lay under coruscant in night
in acres of barren land
i start staring high
if he could make me understand

if he could let me know why
he loves to play with our life
does he has any idea
of the price we pay to survive

if he is the one
who creates our book of fate
then he would be the only one
who mentioned words like "Hate"

for what makes him so rude
was it my fault when he was crucified?
now he simply makes dogs of misery chase me
and laugh realizing my legs are paralyzed

for so long so many times
he made me know the meaning of heart
for so long so many times
he made me know that when it beats, it hurt

though its my life
but i feel i have no choice
so ruthlessly he treats us all
but so scared we are to raise our voice

if he is for real
why don't he come and talk to me face to face
but if i sound eccentric to you
then just keep praying to your invisible image and hope for happy days

all this is now enough for me
time has come to turn the table
if this is how life is supposed to be
i'll rather die than to trust in fable

** just my feelings **

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    I have questioned my faith many times. You always brought me back. I can understand feeling this way.

    all this is now enough for me
    time has come to turn the table
    if this is how life is supposed to be
    i'll rather die than to trust in fable

    These lines really tore at my heart.
    Great job expressing your feelings. I am so glad you know longer are feeling this way.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    No words to comment on this one. All I will say is excellent job writing it, its very heartfelt.

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow this is awesome..truly.
    loved this bit:
    "for so long so many times
    he made me know the meaning of heart
    for so long so many times
    he made me know that when it beats, it hurt"
    ur words are so wise and true.
    Much love,
    >torn -x.x.x-

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Thats amazing! you are so smart, youi ise words i've never even heard of! this is great!!
    and thanks for your comments i appreciate it!
    sammi xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is fantastic! I can completely relate, I've been there and well still am really! I love poems that make you think and you did it wonderfully!

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