Burn useless soul.

by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel   Jan 1, 2006


Swimming in the blood
Of a tainted soul
One more of a person
To find another hole

Bleeding and broken
Thrown to the ground
Without a word spoken
And she's never to be found

Kissed the face of death
Upon exhaling
She waisted her last breath
On the use of wailing

Cries bleed from her lips
And her soul is growing cold
A thorn is in her hips
This picture is getting old

So slash the broken heart
That has no where to go
Make it fall apart
She'd want everyone to know

Taunt her useless mind
And rape her broken body
Leave no traces to find
And make her feel real naughty

Tamper with her emotions
And scar the torn skin
She needs to feel this pain
This is for her sin..

Rot in the life
You have now created
I would let you go
But you cant be sedated...

BURN IN HELL.

*different I know, let me know what you think.*

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    Wow !

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    A
    B
    A
    B

    Rhyme scheme. Not bad. You had A LOT of rhymes in there, and the ending was, indeed different, but I still managed to like this poem. Has a good structure and flow too. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Scary, i think this is a lil off from your personality. i enjoyed the rhymes and all, but the story is killin.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Woah....very very dark!! haha i love it!! its just so full of aingst and all that hah it was great with the flow and everything...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    WOW... thats deep... i'm not sure how you come up with that but i LOVED it... absolutely perfect... WOW!