My blade

by Miss Pipp   Jan 2, 2006


My life will stay this way
where I'm always walking with a blade in one pocket
where i cant trust anyone
in case they try to take the only thing that loves me away,
my blade, the only thing that loves me
in this messed up life of mine there is one thing that loves me
the lick of the blade, my best friend, the only one that cares.

i dig it in
the blood starts flowing.
flowing in a river of my problems
washing away my misfortune
all thanks to the only one that loves me,
my one and only blade

please tell me what you think i always return the favour

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lexi

    Wow nice poem I really like it! :) well thanks for the coment and cute pro file BTW it's cute!

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Its great, it really shows your inner pain. keep writing.
    -David

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Yeah i agree with azlan^^ .. but i couldnt really find the flow all that well.. maybe a little bit of rhyming would make it a little better? just offering my honest opinion but other than that it was really good.. keep it up 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    It was well focuseed around the blade, it highlighted the sense of isolation and need for the blade.
    Well done =]

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    (just to let u knw i comment on one of yr otha peoms, dis was ages ago but ma name was ~*cutie_pie_4eva*~(nadia) well i can reli relate to this...this is an awsum poem...i like it.5/5..i love your poems u got talent...
    p.s thnks heaps for the comment :D,
    love dia mwaz xoxo

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