My Black Silk Shirt

by End Of Eternity   Jan 5, 2006


Silhouette of this black silk shirt
mesmerizing skin of my baby so perfectly
this dove grey jacquard puff
something more than worth for world to see

time & time i fantasized seeing you in this dress
though you should have carried yourself on your own
but fate has chosen some other place for us to meet
so sleep tight in this box, as forever you have gone

just wait for little more time there
and we will be together before sun splits anymore light
just few last preparations to deal with
and i will be wearing my black silk shirt tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This is one of my favorites that you have written.....Congrats on being the featured writer of the week:)

    just wait for little more time there
    and we will be together before sun splits anymore light
    just few last preparations to deal with
    and i will be wearing my black silk shirt tonight

    This stanza just strikes up so many different visions.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This is sad. Yet there is a hint of waiting passion. Breathtaking write.

    just wait for little more time there
    and we will be together before sun splits anymore light
    just few last preparations to deal with
    and i will be wearing my black silk shirt tonight

    Excellent job!
    Such a picture this creates for the minds eye. Very impressive.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Very deep, thats all I can say after reading such a poem. By the way, where did this come from???

    Remember, you still have to put on a red shirt, so forget about black. :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Exceptional work
    good god your an amazing poet

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job very good poem keep it up

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