Paradise of Lies

by Mona   Jan 7, 2006


I close my eyes
To see you in my Paradise of lies

I see heaven's white towers
Fields with many flowers
Beautiful old trees
Swaying in a midsummer breeze

Gold eagles fly
In a beautiful pink sky
Hundreds of birds singing
Every time heaven's bells are ringing

Shiny silver horses
Drinking from the water sources
Relieved to smell your perfume
I turn around to see you, but it's your tomb

Time stops
For my falling tear drops
In this beautiful place
All I really wanted to see was your face

But my friend
I'll sit next to your tomb till the end
I will wait here for dead, just to see you again
Oh my friend, just to see you again

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    LOL. I Laughed as I made that poem, I'm telling you, I've lost it.Lol...

    The first line the flow is kind of bad, it's a lot shorter than the line after it.
    Haha..
    The poem starts off a little..friendly?

    And then it goes..ARGH ARGH..I'm going to kill you! Type of poem..or that's how I see it, and then it goes back to normal..I'm pretty weird, aren't I?

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked it. don't take this as an offense but it seemed like there were two different poems in there. feel free to hate me...i don't mind, lol.

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Of God, this is absolutely heartbreaking, but wow beautifully conveyed! Excellent poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Is this a new poem?? very nice ^_^
    Rosie xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Realy quite amazing...
    your wording is always simple yet incredibly powerful..and to every poem i can relate
    keep up the good work
    you are very talented
    lots of love
    em xxxxxxxx

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