Oh Lord

by Mona   Jan 15, 2006


Oh Lord:
I'm just wondering, couldn't you afford
To give my some more
Then just some dreams to cry for?

Oh Lord:
Just wondering, where is my reward?
For all the hard working
While danger is always lurking

Oh Lord:
Can you help me? I fell aboard
I sunk before going ashore
And now I can't breathe no more

Oh Lord:
Can you now hear the one you always ignored?
Oh yes here I am
And oh no I'm not like them

Oh Lord: take a seat
Watch me standing in the middle of the street
On that white line, I am drinking altar wine,
Screaming; "Your Messiah ain't mine!"

Oh Lord:
I'm sorry; I have lived by my sword
And I would have died by yours
If you wouldn't have shut all my doors

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hmm, I don't know what to say...Awesome job.

    Haha..this has got to be the lamest comment from me..but here I go.

    I think you should put Oh Lord:
    with a colon.

    Hahaha...I'm all out of things to say, I can't even write my poems properly anymore...look what you have done to me!

    Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    Thanks for commenting on my poem, i luv this 1 it really speaks to me. lots of love xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Excellent dear, sorry it took me so long to comment I didn't see you added one...it seems different yet the same...very good though luv ya -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey Mona, I liked the way you wrote this. all the stanzas were awesome.
    and very good rhyming as well.
    keep writing. you're so talented.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Heya hunnie,
    Very nicely written, i like the repitition. :) love ya!!
    Rosie xXx

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