The Torment and Hurt Part III

by The Poetic Child   Jan 17, 2006


The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I just couldn't do it
I dropped the knife
I had to see her again
I couldn't end my life

I curled up in my bed
holding my cell
hoping she would reply
cause my heart has fell

Once i closed my eyes
I feel the vibration
She text-ed me back
I'm in celebration

But she said I'm sorry
I cant even speak
the hurt she felt
made her too weak

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I became Weak
my stomach twist and turned
to read this message
My heart was burned

i text back saying
please say i love you
i need to hear it
my love is sure true

she said she loves back
for theres no sorrow
i told her goodnight
and i call her tomorrow

but i was still scared
scared she was mad
and she was fed up
enough of me she had

the next day i wake up
birds chirping its a beautiful day
i knew what i had to do
The Phone just headed my way

I dialed her number
feeling so mellow
then she picked it up
and said........"Hello"

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    WOW!!!!!! this is just a really great poem! i cant wait to read the next!...great job!...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Way to share your true feelings! 5/5 i am speachless! really

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~*Jenna Leigh*~*~

    Yes, yes, I LOVE IT...your an awesome poet!!! keep em coming!!!!!!

    later
    Jenna

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ahh oi cant wait to read part IV..i am off! THis one was so far the most intense. I cant wait to find out what happens..nice job with telling your reader what they need to know adn still allowing your reader to use there own imaginations!! :)

    Keep it up!! LISSA