Tooth For Tooth (Song)

by End Of Eternity   Jan 21, 2006


**Song - Trying for the first time**

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I am feeling so tired today
tired of fabricating as if my life
is going on a right way

ups & down are elements of life
but if you tell me all this right now
i might end up breaking your jaw

cause right now
i am feeling too high
& i won't cry if you die
for every nail to nail
i hate you
and every tooth for an tooth
away i push you

feeling so lonely tonight
my room is full of screams
but it feels so right
i know this night will be over soon
right back on my feets
i will be marching soon
but if you tell me all this right now
i might end up breaking your jaw

cause right now
i am feeling climax for murder
so don't you speak further
as for every eye for an eye
i hate you
tooth for an tooth
away i push you

just don't try to touch me
as i hate everything about you
so simple, so straight hate, if you could see

shut up
shut up
or i'll make you crawl
shut up
shut up
deep down you fall

cause right now
i am feeling too high
& i won't cry if you die
for every nail to nail
i hate you
and every tooth for an tooth
away i push you

talking to mirror
never felt so good before
just another way to release
the pain without a cure
so i do it ten times a day
but somehow i am feeling so tired today
tired of fabricating as if my life
is going on heaven's way

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    That is good nithin! so sad and so good. i like your description of fabricating life.

    thanks a lot for your nice comments. it means a lot when someone out there reads one's work and appreicates it. it is great to belong to such a wonderful community.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Really good peice, each word seemed to prefectly flow into the next. the end was esspessially good.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Wow... I'm speechless! What an amazing piece of work you did here. I loved it, specially the ending. I can soooo relate to this song of yours, word by word. Excellent, Excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Wow, I definately felt the hatred in that one. Nice job! I can't imagine what it would sound like as a song, it would probably work so well, and everyone who listens to it would feel each and every word as they were spoken. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi Nitin,

    that was great!
    i like that u keep on trying new things.
    this song of urs is great dear. keep it up!

    take care
    Bharti

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