His Eyes Vs. Mine

by Heather M Craig   Jan 24, 2006

My eyes unveil a dream
with a sparkle before each blink.
Everytime he's near me,
my heart begins to sink.

My eyes unveil a hope
as a tear strolls down my cheek.
Everytime I face a day without him,
my body falls a little weak.

My eyes unveil a wish
for you and I to be us again.
Everytime I think of you,
I realize you're just a friend.

His eyes release a dream
with a sparkle after each blink.
Everytime he's near her
his heart begins to sink.

His yes release a hope
with a crimson slit upon his frame.
Everytime he faces a day without her,
he falls more into her game.

His eyes release a wish
from the bottom of his heart, I can view.
And everytime he thinks about what went wrong,
I wish I could be you.

Heather M Craig.


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  • 15 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Amazingly written
    i love the way you showed her and his version similar really got me inspired
    take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Full of heartfelt emotion, I really enjoyed.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautifully penned....love this one alot.

    love ya, Ann

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written 0nce again.

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 15 years ago


    Wow, this is amazing. I love how easily it transitions. So much emotion, you truly have a gift. Glad your back~Holly