Breakaway

by Katie   Jan 29, 2006


Trapped inside this life that isn't me,
why cant i become all i want to be.
theres always a hindrance,
some thing in my way,
but you mark my words,
it'll be different some day.
for there will come a time
when i will just simply be,
purely myself just as you see.
no more of this hiding
no more of these games
i'm stepping into the light,
and releasing my pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Gr8 poem,avery positive ending. well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I'll Say WOW! I liked this one a lot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe. short but great nonetheless. i really enjoy your writing : ) nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow, I really liked this poem hun, it is well written, short, but still powerful and with a stong message. I especially liked your use of hindrance, not too many people know the word or can use it well and you did both beautifully. It also as a bit of positiveness to it which I like, a hope for a bringer future. I am glad you can see things in that way and I wish you nothing but the best!

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Nice job.. i really liked the way you put your feelings to words... keep it up hun!

    sammie

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