by Cuddles Jan 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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With each passing day that I don't hear your voice |
by sarah
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Loved this poem got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x |
by rar
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Good poem |
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Simple, but expressive, capturing emtioons and feelings. You had a good rhyming pattern that didn't feel forced. Great job! |
by Elise
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A touching and heartfelt piece, very powerfull good job |
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REALLY AMAAZING! I LOVED IT!! |