My Love Story

by David Marshall   Jan 31, 2006

You were my friend it was no big deal.
But after a while I started to feel.

We talked for hours always on the phone.
Without you I felt very alone.

Months went by, and I thought I was in love.
Hoping someday to be together like all the stars above.

I treated you good, but you treated me bad.
The things you did made me really sad.

Even after all the things you put me through,
I told you I would always love you.

I tried to move on, because you were never kind.
But for some reason your always on my mind.

At times things would seem alright.
But what about the times you made me cry all night?

They all warned me it would happen again.
But I loved you and didn't want to believe them.

Now it's over, but my love for you will always be.

There's a taste of my sad love story.

© Copy-righted by David A Marshall


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  • 14 years ago

    by Tiffani

    ......... i dont have words. this poem is very sad yet sweet. and it is very well writtin.

    i was in a situation just like this. i think ud like my poems check out all the ones that are dedicated to garrett

    TaKe CaRe,,

    LoTa LoVeN,,


  • 14 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Im speechless!! that was...just great!!! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Katie

    Loved it, exactly my situation too. nice job with it, everything gets better too right

  • 14 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Awww, so sad! I can't wait to read more of your poems!

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Wow dude, that is deep