My Theater

Nitin
Very intense and deep, dark emotions are screaming from your pen. This is a great piece you have created here.

i am so glad to have you all with me
welcome to my theater of dream
this is the place you were supposed to be
so respect my agony when i scream

I would scream with you. Then I would have a bad dream.
Love Cindy

This is great. the darkness is really dark not just messing-around-im-gonna-be-a-sissy-dark-poem. lol. i really like it. esp this line:
bleeding smile we yet have to go through

OMG! Nitin! this is great!

So nice to have you all today
welcome to my theater of dream
ride hell while watching my play
but be silent when i scream

Wonderful, love that first stanza, makes u want to continue reading.

Congrats on making it at the top. It was sure well deserved. I hope one by one all of your poems make it on the top. :-)

Love...
Michelle

Hey Nitin, I see you've made another unique master piece. I love your poems, simply for their one of a kind beauty. Nice job! Keep them coming :)