Between the earth and the stars

by Meme   Feb 9, 2006


Between the earth and the stars
they were flying too far
guided by the moon light
where the pathway was so bright

Between the earth and the stars
they were struggling to beat the bars
wanting to reach somewhere near
where the weather is calm and clear

Between the earth and the stars
no one could know what they are
they were my lost dreams
flying in space with no extreme

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© Copyright 2006 by: gIrL
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  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    The rhyme queen :) I loved the idea and the image you set awesome

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Loved this idea and the title is perfect, it is sad to think of how many people lose their dreams and along with the their faith and happiness and courage to fight for them.

    Nice work.

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Nice poem
    the idea is good and new i like it
    some times we just don't know where our dreams are so we always put them in a very magical shape to keep them ordinary
    well done:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Between the earth adn the stars, hopes and dreams are made , and between the earth and the stars , we live to see them break free and come true ..

    how can somone break his dreams out , his hopes , his wishes,...
    bars are made from what ?

    questions everyone that this poem mean anything to him , wil have to answer for himself

    great expression perfect placign of words
    simply perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem indeed, i liked the ending so much as i wondered what are they those"between the earth and the stars"

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