by David Marshall Feb 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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These tears I cry, |
by Michelle
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Ahhh my brother! |
by Natalie
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This is sad..Really good though! 5/5 Keep ya head up =] |
by Emma
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That was great. i loved the last two lines. they are so powerful and it just adds to the poem. great write. |
by amelia
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Wow ! another great poem |
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Keep repeating the second stanza ... for in it is the hope! Nice write. |