Today will be my last

by TormentedSoul   Feb 17, 2006


Today will be my last.
I am tired of all the
rejection, the taunting
and the pain.
So I say goodbye
to everyone and tell
them today will be my
last and they just laugh.
They say I will not do it
and that it is all a joke.
They will see when
tomorrow starts without me.
Will they even know that I am
gone? Time will only tell.
Will they miss me and feel
dumb that I was not joking
at all? We will surely see.
Today will be my last.
The pills have been taken
and I start to feel dizzy.
The room slowly starts to fade
and darkness slowly creeps in.
My last thoughts run threw my
head as I take my last breath.
The pain starts to cease and all
dreams fade. For this is my last day.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    Really great poem, I love it. Just hopefully you don't really feel this way. Attempting suicide is no picnic..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    This is an amazing poem...all of your poems are...i can feel the emotions well. 5/5
    -lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    This is a great poem...just like in the Grim Reaper one...try putting it in stanzas instead of a paragraph...to me, i think it looks more organized that way but still....like i said this is a great poem..keep it up...

    ~!Sandra!~

  • 18 years ago

    by kei

    Personally i really liked today will be my last , only i really hope it was JUST writing and not for real. luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy Jr.

    Well this was a excellent poem man keep it up

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