Waves

by Love Fallacy   Mar 2, 2006


Crashing
Waves splashing,
A liquid avalanche.
My body shaking
As the blue haired devil
Engulfs me.
Swallowed, eaten,
Digested inside and then
Hurled back up.
Spit back on the sand,
Lying on my back,
Staring at the beating sun,
Only one thing on my mind.
When will I be totally and completely
Digested

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Rofl!
    Your really painted a picture with this peice. For the first part you really captured the subject. But then I sorta got lost with the whole digestion thing.
    It was still a good read.
    So Im gonna give it a 4/5.
    Keep writting,
    Elaine.

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