Dripping Rain

by The Poetic Child   Mar 3, 2006


I don't think you realize
I'm done with me
Take a closer look..
and look at what you see

Read my Words Carefully
I'm trying to give you a hint
To look and see what i mean
Just take a closer look at it

"Do You still have my Gifts"
Thats exactly what i said
But take a closer think
Think really hard in your head

"Do you still love me"
Thats what I'm trying to say
But you said you got in a safe
and you've locked them away

Which means to me
There was love but now its gone
See how our talk went so well
Just really read my Song

You told me you took the balloon
and you deflated it
but you said its nothing bad
To make it seem like you hated it

But Look closer on what i said
"My Balloon is Deflated"
Meaning Your love is Gone
Thats why were separated

The Balloon was like our relationship
It lasted only for so long
Until it was now deflated
Even thought it did nothing wrong

And i did nothing wrong at all
You left me cause we got dull
When you said you want to talk
It was just bullets on my skull

I'm sorry i wasn't the greatest
and our relationship couldn't be perfected
But why did you just leave me so blank
My heart was Dissected

I really just cant believe it
All my friends cant understand
They keep asking me why
I thought you were her man

I say i know right
I thought the same thing
But now i gotta go back
and return the silver ring

yes i got you a ring
Now i have to return it
I have nothing to do with it
And i cant even Burn it

But your happy with someone else
now i just gotta suck up the pain
And get over the fact
That you had the Umbrella
In this Dripping Rain...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    .....im speechless.... i really hope you're ok. i'm here if you need to talk. stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    So deep....i love it. Hang in their. It;s gonna be ok...you're gonna be ok!

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Raina

    Very Strong all the way through I loved it!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Truly amazing... I was missing your poems so much. It has been a while, but I wanna know that I admire your poetry 5/5 Well done my friend! Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow Gr8 job.... Amazin!!! Man sometimes its hard to accept wat u dont want to. Its like someone raping ur heart... I dunno if u understand this but ... if u dont all I have to say is , Things WILL get better eventually... great job with the poem... very emotional.

    ::MELI::