Children

by Tim Fleckney   Mar 9, 2006


Crystalline seas of
Violet and green
Rain molten death on
City's conceived in
Evil
The suits in bars
Worship their paper
Gods and
Hunt for sacrificial
Virgins

School boys stare in
Guilty lust at the
Flash of naked
Middle-aged thighs
Young girls plan
Fairy tale weddings
That end in terror

Children cower in
Closets crying for
Lost innocence
Children lie empty as
Hypocrites cruise
The strip

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This is good, I like the way you write your poems. It's formed in a different way than most, and the truth is not blantly obvious, I had to think about it for a while, and of course..you want people thinking right? Anyways, great poem, once again awesome imagery. You are also going in my favo(u)rites. I'm Canadian too.

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Wow dis was so gwd....love dia mwaz oxox
    u got talent....

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hey Tim great write.My fav lines were
    Children cower in
    Closets crying for
    Lost innocence

    said alot to me!
    good read
    ainz

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Love it! Such sad truths you so beautifully convey.
    "Young girls plan
    Fairy tale weddings
    That end in terror"
    ^^^ Love these lines, so true! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    I was thinking the same as Darien... Only I'm not inspired by Bob so much. Great write Tim, you never cease to impress me with your wonderfully chosen words :)

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