Sweet Revenge

by X2892   Mar 9, 2006


I'm sick and tired
of getting the desire
to think about you.
I haven't forgotten or forgiven you,
you have no flipping clue.

I'm going to break your heart into pieces,
the sight of my anger increases.
losing my sight, losing my mind.
Just completely lost,
there is no limit to the cost
of my revenge.

Just the desire of getting sweet revenge,
i will avenge
my broken heart.
Can't believe I let you do this to me.
Don't flipping worry,
I'm just luring
you to my revenge.

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 19 years ago

    by Caytii

    Good poem and great way to rhyme it...i give it 5/5! good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I loved this one!
    "Just the desire of getting sweet revenge,
    I will avenge
    my broken heart.
    Can't believe I let you do this to me.
    Don't flipping worry,
    I'm just luring
    you to my revenge."

    I loved that stanza! Keep on writing your really great.

  • 19 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Whoa, hold on little buddy :(
    Well maybe yeah sure :)
    I wouldn't blame u for wanting to kill ur ex :)
    I can't blame myself eaither, after that
    * (excuse me) broke my heart :)
    Great poem :)
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by me

    To much anger and i should kno but good poem i think its good for people who want revenge :0

  • 19 years ago

    by Gwen

    Nice, really enjoy your work 5/5 ^_^

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