X Open My Eyes

by Sole   Mar 13, 2006


I was blind
But you opened my eyes
And now I find
I saw the world through lies
False pretences
Hid my view
Dropped my defences
But now I have you

But just as I see
You tear away my heart
Turn your eyes away from me
Can't bear it when we are apart

Never said 'I love you'
Never asked if you loved me
I was lost for words, it's true
I wish I still could not see.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked the first stanza, it flowed good. I didn't like the 2nd and 3rd stanza as much the flow was off because of the wording. Other then that there is nothing wrong with it. I gave it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    The last line --> so beautiful lol
    Very sad poem though but so well written , good job :)

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Ooo very nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Yay didn't comment on this one yet! Ever think of enerting any of your poems in a contest? You should. The last line, was my favorite.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its short but well written and i liked it
    xxxx

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