Treasured Soul

by Kaylee   Mar 14, 2006


The treasures that your soul had spent
Come reaching through the darkness alone
Bring forth the memories you recall most excellent

Lost your dignity through paying the devil rent
Your tattered robes enclose the withered bone
The treasures that your soul had spent

Valentine lovers urge you to repent
Reaping the heartaches you have sown
Bring forth the memories you recall most excellent

Soon the moonlight shines on the tent
You force to envelope the reminders you own
The treasures that your soul had spent

You may know what the lovers meant
Though the inscriptions may be set in stone
Bring forth the memories you recall most excellent

The angels gather messages sent
Which dismiss the lies the devil's blown
The treasures that your soul had spent
Bring forth the memories you recall most excellent

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Lovely, so beautiful. Emotion is expressed throughout. not once have i failed to enjoy reading a poem by you.
    xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by swill

    Soon the moonlight shines on the tent
    You force to envelope the reminders you own
    The treasures that your soul had spent

    ^love the above lines totally...brilliant poem keep it up...can u do a few of mine too? thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Wow, Kaylee. This poem was very good. Not just because of the great descriptions and wording sense. But also because of how you kept the entire poem the same the whole way through. Your use of only two rhymes in the entire poem makes it magnificent. It does not sound forced or anything. Good job.

    -Artimis-

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    This is touching. you write so well,how it all flows and the emotion and heart you put into it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, Amazing Poem. I loved it. The Flow and the Ryhme was great. Good Job.

    ~Joe~

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