Blessed Water

by Kaylee   Aug 20, 2006


Tomorrow water may drown sorrows of my heart
Yet this moment it resides within a trembling lip
A midsummer bout of poison has left them parched
Cracked, as is my Earth, shifting with a thudding heart

Tomorrow water may restore faith in damaged seeds
Buried within forgotten love and mudded self-esteem
Choked with hands that would strangle them to death
And I am nothing except love's unnoticed mourner

Blessed water with streams carved in Nature's wake
Where diamonds sparkle from their cavas reflected
Teasing eyelashes admiring the past, lost in future
And hearing a soul wishing you'd arrive with a tear

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    WOAH! this is really great. . I love reading this, ^^, just like it very, though not much of a flow. . but overall. . . . fantastic

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    That was really beautiful Kaylee

    I loved it

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Another very good poem.
    Yes, this one didnt capture me as much as the others but it was still a worthwhile read.
    You have talent to bring life into your poemss, make them real, it is really good how you do that.
    keep writing
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    This poem spoke so many different emotions and scenarios and i think thats why it makes it so beautiful and wonderfully written. please keep writing and stay safe stron and healthy

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't agree with the comment that you had no flow. It flowed very well for me, like a picture being painted or a story being told. Probably the second of the two considering this is poetry, lol. The only question I have...what is a "cavas"? (third to last line) I'm either dumb or you misspelled "canvas" or something, though I'm probably just dumb, lol.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, you have a good way of stating things without making them cliche.

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