by Sole Mar 19, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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I stand on the hill, watch a beautiful sunset |
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Really great job, a couple parts the flow broke, but it didnt seem to do any harm, as usual, great work! |
by StefQ
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Emotional, deep, dark what more can i say! this poem is really really good, also good rhyme scheme, very good flow and it has a meaning :) 5/5 |
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Very nice visuals to accompany taht very nice poem. another startler. very good. |
by Tara Kay
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Gave me shivers, made me see something deep and emotional. well done |
by PS
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This is dark and heartfelt. nice job! |