Alone (2005 age 13)

by Imogen   Apr 4, 2006


Standing alone in the field,
The darkness closes in on it,
Suppresses it,
Suffocates it,
All hope leaves it,
And there's nothing it can do.

Sitting alone at his desk,
His problems close in on him,
Suppress him,
Suffocate him,
All hope leaves him,
And there's nothing he can do.

Exploring alone in the cave,
The sea closes in on them,
Suppresses them,
Suffocates them,
All hope leaves them,
And there's nothing they can do.

Lying alone on the hospital bed,
Death closes in on her,
Suppresses her,
Suffocates her,
All life leaves her,
And there's nothing she can do.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    WOw good job!
    i like how you used repitition in the 3rd and 4th lines of each stanza: suppresses___ & suffocates___
    it makes the whole meaning of the poem stronger.
    ery deep and sad . i couldnt write anything like that when i was 13 which was only two years ago but two years ago i sucked (hehe) anyways, greAt job
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by [x]Demi[x]

    Wow this is amazing its very powerful and i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    That's pretty good. I liked it even though it was sad. You could make a song out of that. Anyway nice job 5/5
    -Vino

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Nice poem, I liked how you wrote it

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Wow! I really like this piece. The wording is so strong! Its difently a great write of yours. Keep it up doll.

    And thanks,for the comment doll.

    5/5

    Kat

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