by Imogen Apr 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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The past I know is intertwined with pain. |
by lonelynow
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I love how it is all explained at the end. |
by Goran Rahim
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Another great poem here |
by Samantha
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Honestly, this wasn't the best poem I've ever read because of your style. Even though you have a bumpy style (by style I mean how you break up the lines), though, this is one of the most touching pieces of writing I've read in a long, long time. I'm not sure if it's because I understand or if it's because you made me understand, but either way, if you fix your lines, this would be a stellar poem. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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This is very good. |
by lonelynow
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Wow. wow wow wow. i don't know what to say! this is such an amzing poem!!!! |