Now it's over

by David Marshall   Apr 5, 2006


Now it's over,
I'm done with your virulent lies.
I know I loved you,
blinded with these vibrant cries.

To break my heart,
was all you contrive.
Soul ripped apart,
how will I survive.

I reiterated the phrase,
''I love you''.
Now that it's over,
what will I do.

Here I wonder,
No longer sober.
Here I ponder,
It really is over.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    I love the last stanza... And the whole poem was really great. I love the wording especially. Very professional, David. hehe. Loved it anyways. It was very good

    Love Always
    ~Casey J

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Great poem! Short but sweet =p
    The language you used is great, I don't know what half the words mean lol but it is very effective. Take care,
    - Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I love the last stanza.

  • 18 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    You use words very well in this poem, making easily understood images. I enjoyed this a lot.

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