Love is Not a Toy

Excellent job. I really liked the message in this poem. It could go in the life section too. Perfect ending. Though like the other one, you can improve the flow. You've got everything else.

I agree love is def not a toy or a game to be played

I think you would do better without rhyme, because it seems really fake in this poem. Possibly you're just much better at free verse. However, you're still young. Lots of time to work on rhyme. I know, I'm working on it too. :) I realize you're not much younger than me, but when I was your age (a few years ago), I was where you are now. I didn't get very far. If you work at your poetry, you'll get a lot farther than me because you have a real talent. I know that sounds kinda stupid, but your words are powerful. Sometimes you just know when someone's meant to be great. ;)

Okay I'll stop rambling now, but I'm waiting for more of your poetry. :)

Great Poem. And a very truthful poem. Alot of people do poems based on there on acusations(sp) but this one is so true, Love is defintly not a game and you got that point across entirely. :)

Thanks for the comment you gave me It was one of the nicest I have ever recieved :)...I'm added you to my faves

This was really a gr8t poem and your right about the title and it just say's the truth I loved it keep it up!! ^_^