The Girl

by disenchanted   Apr 8, 2006


I am the girl
With the sad eyes and smiling lips
The girl,
Whose life is built up on faith & hope
The girl,
Who has dreams she'll never reach
The girl,
Who wishes her life to be something else
The girl,
Who knows too much sorrow and pain
The girl,
Whose heart is in fragile shards
The girl,
Who always has fresh tears
The girl,
Whose surrounded by lies
The girl,
With scars in her core
I am the girl
Who doesn't know who she is

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lovemelodyx3

    Very lovely dear.
    And thanks for commenting mine
    5/5 for sure lovey!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Very nice and the repeating effect worked very well...nice and the structure was good too...thx for ur comment,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    This poem is great

    i think most females feel like this in there life time
    the trick to over come this feeling and then you find who you really are

    the poem was great also the flow was too

    well done!!

    lana

  • 17 years ago

    by Blazegrl

    I really like this! Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Good poem.

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