Alone I Burn

by End Of Eternity   Apr 10, 2006


Waves of sorrow
waves of pain
crimson tears
falling like rain
behind the darkest cloud
in my empty vein
in the middle of sorrow land
where my soul dance like insane

colorless rainbow
under cold sun
fading like my life
from the edge of horizon
while searching for serenity
on a pointed gun
crawling for acceptance
while screaming for fun

another tomorrow
another deception
with same mirror
and a dying reflection
craving for a smile
in love's misconception
crippled within myself
awaiting salvation

so hollow
so alone
embraced by my broken heart
since true love is gone
fading like a rainbow
from the edge of horizon
screaming for acceptance
alone i burn

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This is very sad for a love poem. Love the imagery and word choices. Excellent!

    another tomorrow
    another deception
    with same mirror
    and a dying reflection
    craving for a smile
    in love's misconception
    crippled within myself
    awaiting salvation

    Hoping for the day your reflection is smiling back at you :)
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Wow!!! congrats! u won 1st place!!!! u can check it in my contest. great poem, i love it! it's great, awesome, it has EVERYTHING!!!!!! good luck! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Wow................what else is there.......I really do like this poem and it is just screaming to me sorrow and pain and i love it again another superb poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow.
    that's all i can say; just wow. i can really feel the emotion...especially in the last stanza.
    amazing...i hope that one day i can write as good as this...
    5/5
    Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    WOW!!!! This left me breathless, motionless, and speachless altogether!! no joke!!! It's hard to keep back tears after reading that!!! You portrayed the image of a broken heart SOOO well...better then i've ever seen it portrayed before!! This poem has got to be one of my alltime favorites!!! No joke!!! Thank you so much for your comment on my poem about my grandpa...you made me feel a lot better!! Thanks so much!! This poem is soooo amazing...definate 5/5!! keep up the good work!!

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